Then when I looked out the plane window…I discovered to my surprise that the vibrant green grass was replaced with a golden colour. In the centre of the field of gold was an entrancing haze of blue which looked like a gigantic boulder dropped from the heavens. The plane made a sudden decent and within seconds we were on the ground. I ran towards the boulder and as I approached I got warmer and warmer until I couldn’t go any further. Then coming from the rock was a barely audible murmur “I’ve been waiting for you!” and suddenly the boulder started to move. Unfolding. Slowly.
This is fab I really like it very much. I think you need to use a ellipse at the end of your last sentence.
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